Week 12 Blog Reviews

Susan Johnson:
Is Governmental Intervention the way to go?: I really enjoyed your discussion on the balance of "self-propelled dreams of the people while utilizing the assistance and presence of the government. " I thought it was a good way to begin your blog. Also, I thought it was smart of you to present some example of why some indiviuals have a hard time trusting the government. You made it clear in this blog that your main argument was to have balance. I, like you, stand somewhere in the middle. Overall I think you did a good job presenting your opinion and providing reasons why!

Money makes the World go round. : I found that you had a very creative title that went perfectly with your blog! I liked how you tied in finance in the modern world, by discussing our current economic situation, with also talking about finance in earlier years. You also provided good informative facts about finance, which essentially was the whole purpose of this blog! Good job! :)


Deirdre Cienki
Yes or No to Gov't Control : I liked how you chose to present your opinion as an introductory paragraph and then go on to discuss why some people want government control and others don't. I do agree with you...the subject could get a little tense, but I also agree that I, like you, fall somewhere in the middle of the two extremes. Overall, you did a good job presenting your opinion.

Money Madness: I thought the first two sentences of your introduction paragraph were an excellent thesis statement for this blog. You did a good job presenting facts about finance in the past and the roles it has played!



Jess Tavizon:
Two views One Country: You do a really good job in organizing all of your thought in all of your blogs that I have read! I thought you had a really strong thesis statement, and I liked how you restated some of the information from the article we read. I also liked that you gave reason why you fell somewhere in between of the two arguments, because you found valid arguments for both sides. I also really liked your second paragraph! The story of Ashton was really interesting, and it also provided reason as to why you would not fully trust them. Overall, I really enjoyed reading your opinion in this blog!

Crunching Numbers: First of all, I liked your title! Your introduction was very well constructed and I enjoyed your use of examples, such as that people spend money every single day because we have to eat, and we can't walk around in our "birthday suits". Overall you did a good job providing reasons as to why finance has became so big.